Stormdancer by Jay Kristoff

September 12, 2012 Reviews 0 ★★★½

Stormdancer by Jay KristoffStormdancer by Jay Kristoff Published by Thomas Dunne Books on September 18, 2012
Genres: Adult Fantasy
Pages: 336
Format: ARC
Source: print ARC from Amazon Vine

The Shima Imperium verges on the brink of environmental collapse; an island nation once rich in tradition and myth, now decimated by clockwork industrialization and the machine-worshipers of the Lotus Guild. The skies are red as blood, the land is choked with toxic pollution, and the great spirit animals that once roamed its wilds have departed forever.

The hunters of Shima's imperial court are charged by their Shōgun to capture a thunder tiger – a legendary creature, half-eagle, half-tiger. But any fool knows the beasts have been extinct for more than a century, and the price of failing the Shōgun is death.

Yukiko is a child of the Fox clan, possessed of a talent that if discovered, would see her executed by the Lotus Guild. Accompanying her father on the Shōgun’s hunt, she finds herself stranded: a young woman alone in Shima’s last wilderness, with only a furious, crippled thunder tiger for company. Even though she can hear his thoughts, even though she saved his life, all she knows for certain is he’d rather see her dead than help her.

But together, the pair will form an indomitable friendship, and rise to challenge the might of an empire.

Japanese steampunk? Yes please. Steampunk is a genre I have a few hits but mostly misses in, but anything with Asian influences and/or subject matter interests me. This and how cool the author is (how an author behaves toward reviewers and other people really makes a difference to me) made me want to read this book so badly that when I saw I was getting a copy, I started jumping up and down and screaming. No joke, I really did. It was a little more excitement than it ultimately deserved, but it did deserve most of it.

Most of the cast is well-characterized, especially main character Yukiko and her father, who is the only family she has left after her twin brother died and her mother left them. There are a few things I still wanted from Yukiko’s characterization, like more insight into where her life was going before the fateful voyage to capture an arashitora/thunder tiger for the Shogun, but her evolution over the novel is both sad because of what she has to go through in order for it to happen and fantastic. Multiple characters are much more than they first appear to be and I loved the surprise of seeing who they really are.

Kristoff’s novel is well-plotted and carries a lot of strong themes, the price of change (as Buruu the thunder tiger puts it, it all boils down to how much you’re willing to give up to get what you want) and the need to protect the environment just two of them. The first half was rough due to some issues with the writing that I’ll detail in a minute, but once I got into the novel, I really enjoyed myself. An event at the end packs some good emotional punch, but considering the themes and how things were already going, I saw it coming and that robbed it of some power.

Why aren’t there more novels like this one? Seriously, this is a much-needed shot of originality into YA (though it’s more of a YA-adult crossover novel than anything else).

Most of my issues with Stormdancer lie with the writing. I have a very short attention span and though I’ve tried to correct it, it’s not something I can easily get around and it troubles me in daily life. In its first half, Stormdancer is heavy on detailing the world, getting down to the most minute pieces, and this clashes badly with my attention span. There are many people who love for their novels to be detailed down to the piece of lint on the back of someone’s pants, but I am not that kind of person. Minute detailing makes me skim and lose interest. The first hundred pages of the novel were a slog for me to read because of that.

Third-person narration is great. The way it opens up the world for greater exploration beyond one person’s mind makes me love it, but even that can have its downfalls. Stormdancer‘s third-person narration bounces in and out of several characters’ heads (I can count at least six off the top of my head, though Yukiko remains prime narrator) and third-party narrator has a distinct voice of their own. What troubles me about novels with this sort of narration is that when a line comes along that leaves a bad impression on me, I can’t be sure whether it’s the character’s thought or the narrator’s, and Stormdancer and I had that issue a few times.

You’re probably tired of hearing me harp on about the writing, but I’ve got just one more grievance to air out: guiding statements. They’re sneaky little things. They don’t seem like they’re telling at first, but they are. They’re also guiding you to feel a certain way rather than showing you the same thing and letting you come to feel a certain way about it yourself.  These happen mainly in the first hundred pages or so of the novel and serve the purpose of setting up the world, but guiding statements really get my goat. I really don’t need to be tricked into feeling a certain way about something. If it is written right, I’ll feel that emotion anyway.

In the second half of the novel, there is marked improvement in every respect–even in areas where you thought it couldn’t get any better! Despite all my issues with the writing, the novel itself was great and I am hooked for the sequel. Bring on book two!


What’s Left of Me by Kat Zhang

September 11, 2012 Reviews 0 ★★★★

What’s Left of Me by Kat ZhangWhat's Left of Me by Kat Zhang Published by HarperCollins on September 18, 2012
Genres: YA Sci-fi
Pages: 352
Format: eARC
Source: eARC via Edelweiss
Eva and Addie started out the same way as everyone else—two souls woven together in one body, taking turns controlling their movements as they learned how to walk, how to sing, how to dance. But as they grew, so did the worried whispers. Why aren’t they settling? Why isn’t one of them fading? The doctors ran tests, the neighbors shied away, and their parents begged for more time. Finally Addie was pronounced healthy and Eva was declared gone. Except, she wasn’t…

For the past three years, Eva has clung to the remnants of her life. Only Addie knows she’s still there, trapped inside their body. Then one day, they discover there may be a way for Eva to move again. The risks are unimaginable–hybrids are considered a threat to society, so if they are caught, Addie and Eva will be locked away with the others. And yet…for a chance to smile, to twirl, to speak, Eva will do anything.

The dark horse ride again! And wow, was the ride intense. I came into What’s Left of Me with absolutely no expectations, and what I got blew me away. I need more fantastic YA novels in my life and Zhang gave me exactly what I have been asking for.

Addie and Eva’s relationship as twin souls sharing the same body in a world where hybrids like them are despised, locked up, and considered dangerous is complex and what I would expect from two people in such a situation, though I feel the complexity of their relationship was not explored to its full extent. All the things they have to share whether or not they want to, deeper feelings about their dynamic–details like these are touched on, but I would have liked to see them be delved into more thoroughly. Nevertheless, my heart ached for these girls.

Eva’s position as the narrator when she interacts so little with the story she is part of is a different twist than what I’m used to and I loved it. Her story is tightly told and kept me in my seat when there were a million other things I should have been doing instead of reading this novel. (Eva also gets a bonus for narrating in past tense. Nothing against novels told in present tense, but I can only read so much present tense before I want to do what my brother did and slam my head through a glass door.)

The romantic element is on the backburner for almost the entire novel and it’s better that way. The focus remains on the bond between the characters, which makes the two characters coming together for their requisite romantic kiss at the end that much sweeter (and it was sweet, I promise; even I liked it). Distracting readers with romance when the bond of sisterhood between Addie and Eva and the question of what happens to hybrids when they’re found out would have hurt What’s Left of Me.

The government line put out about hybrids (they’re dangerous!) doesn’t work well. Why are they dangerous? The explanation offered doesn’t fully satisfy me with its circular logic (they’re dangerous because they’re dangerous). Some issues hybrids may have are put out, such as mental instability and constant frustration because of two possibly-incompatible souls sharing one body, but nothing is offered that makes it sound even plausible that they’re dangers to society. The hybrids have good reason to be angry, though–the normals deposed their government, labeled them all threats to society, and started locking them up. Readers are supposed to think the government line is idiotic, but it is so bad that I’m not sure why so many people within the novel believe it.

There is apparently technology in their world that can detect souls? It’s one thing if it can detect changes in brain activity when Eva and Addie “talk”, but some of the research I did indicated that usually happens with more intense cases of DID/MPD. Addie and Eva’s case is anything but intense by even their standards. I will admit this could have been a misinterpretation on my part. And the small anti-vaxxer slant of the novel? I’m not really into that either, and that’s really all I can say about it.

My review kind of makes it sound like I didn’t like it much, but I swear I did. I don’t enjoy books the way I enjoyed What’s Left of Me very often and the little issues are next to nothing for me. I’ll definitely be back for more of The Hybrid Chronicles. Put this on your to-read lists, everyone. Zhang is an author to watch.


Red Fox by Karina Halle

September 7, 2012 Reviews 0 ★★★★

Red Fox by Karina HalleRed Fox by Karina Halle Published by Self-published on June 12, 2011
Genres: Adult Horror, Adult Paranormal
Pages: 324
Format: eBook
Source: finished copy from the author
With Book Two of the Experiment in Terror Series, Perry Palomino and Dex Foray trade in the stormy Oregon coast for the unforgiving deserts of New Mexico.

In the for­got­ten town of Red Fox, a Navajo cou­ple is tor­tured by things unseen and by motives unknown. Wild ani­mals slink through their house in the dark, a bar­rage of stones pound their roof nightly, and muti­lated sheep car­casses are turn­ing up on their prop­erty. Armed with a cam­era and just enough to go on, Perry and Dex travel to the des­o­late locale, hop­ing to film the super­nat­ural occur­rences and add cred­i­bil­ity to their flail­ing web­cast. Only their show has a lot more work­ing against them than just grow­ing pains. Tested by dubi­ous ranch hands, a ghost from Dex’s past, and shapeshift­ing decep­tion, the ama­teur ghost hunters must learn to trust each other in order to fight the most ancient of myths…or die trying.

A quick disclaimer before I begin: the author is one of my friends. Neither my rating nor my review have been influenced by this.

This review was hard to write. Like, wow, man. Wow.

Perry and Dex’s new jobs as the host and cameraman of the webshow Experiment in Terror takes them all the way from the Pacific Northwest to New Mexico, home of some creepy-ass shit going on. It’s a good thing I was in the mood for creepy because wow, did this book deliver! Some scenes, like the scorpion attack during the sweat ceremony, were well-written and the best kind of hair-raising. Scary things aren’t my schtick, but I couldn’t stop reading.

Perry and Dex, now posing as husband and wife so they can stay on the ranch where all the unusual activity is happening, still have fantastic banter and their sexual tension is rapidly heating up. With the introduction of Dex’s old/former friend Maximus, we get to learn a little more about how Dex used to be and how that plays a role in who he is as Perry knows him. Perry’s narrative voice drew me in thoroughly–to the point where I decided to take Red Fox with me on laundry day rather than a book I’ve been dying to read for a year and a half. Perry ends up doing some dumb things, but this is Perry. She ain’t perfect and her doing the occasional dumb thing helps move the book along/develop her character.

(My experience was made that much more fun because I read this in tandem with the relevant stories from The Dex-Files and got to see a scene through Dex’s POV as soon as I was done seeing it through Perry’s. I recommend this only if you’re the kind of person who doesn’t mind spoilers most of the time.)

I can’t recall having many issues with this installment. A little bit of rough writing and editing issues–less than what I saw in Darkhouse and The Benson, which is great–and a lack of understanding about the antagonists’ motivations. As they say in the book, some people just get angry sometimes, and that’s very true. Still, I wanted a little more from it.

Dead Sky Morning, the third book of the series, is ready to go on my Kindle. If the next books on my plate weren’t so high priority (and long-awaited; one of them was delayed for over a year), I’d be jumping into it right now!


Hanging by a Thread by Sophie Littlefield

September 5, 2012 Reviews 0 ★★★

Hanging by a Thread by Sophie LittlefieldHanging by a Thread by Sophie Littlefield Published by Delacorte BFYR on September 11, 2012
Genres: Mystery, YA Contemporary
Pages: 288
Format: eARC
Source: eARC via NetGalley
Summer is the best part of the year in Winston, California, and the Fourth of July is the highlight of the season. But the perfect town Clare remembers has changed, and everyone is praying that this summer will be different from the last two—that this year's Fourth of July festival won't see one of their own vanish without a trace, leaving no leads and no suspects. The media are in a frenzy predicting a third disappearance, but the town depends on tourist dollars, so the residents of Winston are trying desperately to pretend nothing's wrong.

And they're not the only ones hiding something.

Clare, a seamstress who redesigns vintage clothing, has been blessed—or perhaps cursed—with a gift: she can see people's pasts when she touches their clothes. When she stumbles across a denim jacket that once belonged to Amanda Stavros, last year's Fourth of July victim, Clare sees her perfect town begin to come apart at the seams.

In a town where appearance means everything, how deep beneath the surface will Clare dig to uncover a murderer?

There are a lot of things parents will do for their children. Some will stay in unpleasant situations for the sake of keeping their children safe and happy. Some will break the law (as I learned when my own mother covered what is normally an estimated forty-five minute drive in about twenty minutes trying to get home when something happened to my brother). As well as being a satisfying mystery, Hanging by a Thread is a wonderful illustration of just how far a parent can go for their child.

Clare’s descriptions of what she did with clothing made little sense to me (I am not a fashion person in any sense), but they were charged with such authentic passion for what she was doing that I loved them anyway. The only element of the novel stronger than her voice and descriptions were the interpersonal relationships of Clare and her mother. No, that’s not right. The relationships of multiple characters with their mothers–Clare’s mom with her own mother, Rachel and her mother, and Mrs. Stavros’s struggle after her daughter’s death, along with Clare and her mom–together really make Hanging by a Thread shine.

Her presence could have been stronger, but I liked to see Clare’s mother be given a strong personality and depth when so many books forget about the parents. Her bitterness toward her mother Nana for the trouble Nana’s psychometry (a gift that Clare inherited and used relatively well) caused her, the fights she had with Clare over her life–they felt real. I honestly felt sorry for her after some of the things her daughter said to her. I thought a few times that Clare, as good as her intentions were, needed to butt out of her mother’s life.

My main problem with this book? Jack. More specifically, the romantic relationship between Clare and Jack. It was insta-love from their first conversation over clothes and it never got any better. Why did they like each other? What interests do they share? I have absolutely no idea why these two people are infatuated with one another. Honestly and truly, this book would have earned itself one more star had it not been for this poorly written romance.

Once Clare gets to using everything she has learned to unravel the mystery, everything she didn’t know but needed to know is dumped upon her by another character for two straight chapters. The information itself is shocking because it wasn’t an obvious answer to me, but its delivery was so dry and lacking in finesse that all the shock I should have felt was drained away.

One of my friends gave a glowing review to one of Littlefield’s other books, but I’m not sure I’ll try to read any of her other works after what I’ve found in Hanging by a Thread. I’m scared the romantic angle will end up messing up an otherwise great book like it did here and I can only take so much of that kind of frustration per year. Meeting my quota so early in the year would not be a good idea, I think. Still, the potential shown in Hanging by a Thread to create strong relationships between family members makes it a possibility.


Living Violet by Jaime Reed

September 1, 2012 Reviews 0 ★★★½

Living Violet by Jaime ReedLiving Violet by Jaime Reed Published by Dafina/K-Teen on December 27, 2011
Genres: YA Paranormal
Pages: 304
Format: eBook
Source: Bought
He's persuasive, charming, and way too mysterious. And for Samara Marshall, her co-worker is everything she wants most--and everything she most fears. . .

Samara Marshall is determined to make the summer before her senior year the best ever. Her plan: enjoy downtime with friends and work to save up cash for her dream car. Summer romance is not on her to-do list, but uncovering the truth about her flirtatious co-worker, Caleb Baker, is. From the peculiar glow to his eyes to the unfortunate events that befall the girls who pine after him, Samara is the only one to sense danger behind his smile.

But Caleb's secrets are drawing Samara into a world where the laws of attraction are a means of survival. And as a sinister power closes in on those she loves, Samara must take a risk that will change her life forever. . .or consume it.

Living Violet didn’t really have any expectations to live up to, but if it had had any, it surpassed them easily. So much fluff that I could choke on it! A heroine with a brain! The cover might make it seem SUPER SRS, but this book is not that serious and overdramatic. It’s pretty funny, actually.

Samara’s narrative voice flows well and her story is compulsively readable. Rather than reading a few chapters at a time, I read the entire book in three or four quick bursts where I couldn’t get enough. She’s got a good brain in her head too; multiple times, she’s not afraid to enforce some boundaries on Caleb and get some distance when things become too much for her to handle. She also recognizes that Google is not very helpful when it comes to finding out more about one’s supernatural boyfriend. More than one silly trope in YA PNR gets picked on and most of the time, it’s done pretty well.

Though the novel lost direction for a while roughly halfway through, finding the motivation to read on was rarely a problem. Samara’s wisecracking as she poked the tropes, her developing relationship with Caleb, and the development of Reed’s fascinating mythology behind the Cambions were what usually kept me going. Even though low blows at popular books normally irritate me, this one’s attempt at it (complete with a teenage girl who says others are just jealous and don’t get it the way a troll on someone’s review might) made me start giggling. Those sections are highlighted so I can get back to them more easily.

So what kept me from giving what was one of the most entertaining books I’ve read in recent memory a higher rating? For one, the writing was a little… over-the-top sometimes. One line where Caleb’s gaze was able to disrobe and deflower her while still looking innocent had me rolling my eyes and there were similar moments throughout the novel. Samara also had three strikes against her for calling a guy a man-whore (that’s not okay no matter what gender they are), calling some preteen girls prostitots (I have NO respect for anyone real or fictional who has no problem using this word), and use of “retarded” to call something stupid. I don’t quite care if it’s “realistic”; it still makes me angry.

The implications of one of the reasons Samara is able to resist Caleb’s pull is rather iffy too. She can resist because she’s a virgin and is satisfied with her love life as it is, but girls who have had sex or are somewhat unhappy with their love life will throw themselves at Caleb–sometimes literally. Basically, if they’ve had a taste of guys, these girls can’t stop themselves sometimes. (That leaves me asking: what about the gay people? Are lesbians attracted to Caleb just because they’re female? Are gay guys attracted to him on his own merits or does the pull affect them too?)

I was entertained enough by Living Violet to want its sequel Burning Emerald ASAP (though it helps that the sequel’s blurb says something about the antagonist wanting Samara; I’m a crackshipper by nature and that blurb dangled catnip in front of my face). If you’re in a bad mood and need something sweet and fluffy, check this book out. Who knows? All the sweets consumed in-book might even keep you from going for comfort food instead!